Purist Brushed

Is This A Good Poem To Win in A Contest?? 10 PNTS FOR BEST ANSWER!?
I’m 15 and wrote this poem for a Huge contest in MI. Is It Good Enough To Win??
Our eyes hold secrets but also
they are the pathways to our hearts
where love lives so deep within,
flowering like a rose.
Is not heaven the same? Filled with roses;
sweet, fragrant roses with blissful petals
without the thorns carried on Earth.
The thorns that test our basest faith
Depth is only used
to describe a rose
And the purist of such
used only describe the heavens
The sweet scent
of the brilliant reds of the petals
the brush of a thorn
The earth
soil
the roots of the flower
the beggining of our jorney
go side by side
we firmly plant our faith as the foundation of our lives.
The Thorns, life’s obtacles,
pains,
the troubles that challenge our faith and knowledge.
The Flowering buds, Heaven, the end of our journey,
blooming to embrace us.
Eternal Love, The greatest reward, .
a gift upon reaching the heights
I love that poem and it definitely has a chance of winning. A couple of tips, try making your second verse about the “The sweet scent of the brilliant reds of the petals the brush of a thorn” a little longer if you can. Also fix up the grammar a touch.
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