Flooring Garrison
Are the following written correctly in English?
Nancy,I completly agree with every thing you said;however,the tone of voice you chose to use while expressing your opinions was very unacceptable.
Johnny,walked in the room,threw is back pack on the floor,walked into the kitchen and sat at the dinner table across from his mother.
“Mom” Jonny said while resting his hands on the table;”today at school my teacher Mr.Garrison,informed me that I was going to fail English because of my lack of ‘passion’ to the written word.
Each sentence you gave had several errors. Here is the corrected version:
Nancy, I completely agree with everything you said; the tone of voice you chose to use while expressing your opinions, however, was very unacceptable.
Johnny walked in the room, threw his backpack on the floor, walked into the kitchen, and sat at the dinner table across from his mother.
“Mom,” Johnny said while resting his hands on the table, “today at school my teacher, Mr.Garrison, informed me that I was going to fail English because of my lack of ‘passion’ to the written word.”
(About the first sentence, it’s grammatically incorrect to start a clause with the word “however,” so I relocated it to the middle of the second clause.)
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